Random Senryu: I found my way in…

I found my way in,

And, once in, felt so confined,

I found my way out.

 

 

And as a side note, is there a policy on punctuation in Haiku/Senryu’s? I generally vary depending on flow and structure, and I like to think of punctuation more as a tool rather than a rule. What do you think?

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3 thoughts on “Random Senryu: I found my way in…

      • Though we sometimes write in a cryptic or abbreviated fashion, if you can read it to yourself and understand it then others should be able to as well. If not, the polite will ask for clarification.

        You write well; I think you’ll have no trouble being understood!

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